The Dreams Of Our Youth Comments

I love the image of the bucket of thoughts too messy. I've recently had the very un-fun experience of baling out water from a flooded room. Buckets of memories from an ending love affair fits well with that reference. They just keep coming. But the reality of the two people are evanescent...like dreams of youth. Yes, well done. Thanks Sofia.

Beautiful and very emotional, brilliant work.

Beautifully sad, gazing into the memory Of times past. Nicely worded! KW

a word graphic, almost a visual, deeply felt. nice poem with a fluid tone wistfulness writ large with a smattering of nostalgia, well expressed emotions. these lines do not well up just like that, there is vivid memory behind it liked

A nostalgic piece about your childhood. Everyone has such tear-rousing memories but you have captured your case with such tremendous poetic detail and vividness.

Lovely, tender and romantic with a wistfulness felt within your words of younger days. Beautiful tribute to the memories you have had together through the years! Love it very much! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

Very sweet and romantic. Memories is what will keep us together. Nice read.

Too many photos of you; but, there is still hope in my life. Nice work. Thanks for sharing.

Very good imagery, a really great poem and a worthy 10

Good memories live for ever..........liked it.