The Dreams Comments

Maybe the dreams become true As we start writing a new piece Where there’s no place for ghosts and mists Where the life is respected as it is Then some dreams will comes true As we start wiping the tears As we keep our head out of gloom Some dreams realize some do'nt but we must keep dreaming for dreams are life. A beautiful and thought provoking poem, Allan. A dreamful 10. Best Wishes Naseer

a beautiful poem shows the awareness of the poet about the causes of the failure the causes of any failure ended with a hopeful writing...well done..10+++ Maybe the dreams become true As we start writing a new piece Where there’s no place for ghosts and mists Where the life is respected as it is Then some dreams will comes true As we start wiping the tears As we keep our head out of gloom

Initial images and catharsis are very powerful. But I am more impressed in realizing dreams in the form of poetry. Wow!

Beautiful poem where you have put so much thought into your lovely images. It also flows so well and I believe in some miracles, but we do create much of own reality. Just dreaming is not being positive, but writing and helping others and working together, can bring with it positive energy. Great work Allan! 10 Karin Anderson

a fantastuc write of the dreams...... when sometimes they come true we are gifted........ see my 10 ++

a fantastuc write of the dreams...... when sometimes they come true we are gifted........ see my 10 ++

so very true..do dreams really come true, and if they do..its only for a moment or too

classic...i give you a 10

Never the dreams becomes true As we await for miracles from above it is beautiful. simply best...10 read mine also dreams not come true

this is beautiful..dreams may be impossible..but there are dreams that comes as warns.grace

may the dreams of boons become true through hope, belief and determination. glad to hear such a message.

Maybe the dreams become true As we start writing a new piece Where there’s no place for ghosts and mists Where the life is respected as it is Then some dreams will comes true As we start wiping the tears As we keep our head out of gloom ------- rhymes were fine together with the diction... and vividness of the poem was great...10+++

It is really an excellent poem on dream. Dream never, but sometimes became true. I love the way you have concluded with happy message.10+++

Its not a dream where some parts of the world were living like Hell came to them for a reason that only they know.Its a dream world when everyone has their dream comes true.

a poem abt dreams and the aspirations ans shades of grey that come with it..beautiful its a lovely piece...

Dreams, I hope my come true 10s

This is the GREATEST POEM I have ever read. An authentic piece of modern poetry that applies to all Nations every nuke and corner of the present day world. What else can I say. I wish this poem is placed in every website and published in every journal and magazine..........................TERRIFIC STUFF INDEED. I AM SELECTING THIS AS MY ALL TIME FAVOURITE. TAKING COPIES OF IT AND DISTRIBUTING TO MY FRIENDS.