Friday, September 14, 2012

The Dreamless Sleep Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sleep now beloved the dreamless sleep,
Lost forever to this sphere.
Never to awaken from the abyss so deep,
Or to see the ones that you held dear.
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Juan Olivarez
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Smoky Hoss 15 September 2012

This has the sensation and depth of an ancient poem; very good.

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Valerie Dohren 14 September 2012

This is beautiful Juan, the idea of death being a dreamless sleep is wonderful. Love it.

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