Wednesday, March 4, 2015

The Dreaming Child Comments

Rating: 5.0

You are innocent and cute,
You are pretty and lovely,
When you move your lips,
As if you are being fed,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Farhan Mirza 09 June 2015

I want to thank you so much for writing this poem. You have no possible idea how much it really touched me. Really, This is your best in my opinion.

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Hazel Durham 09 March 2015

Superb write about the pure beauty of a child with inspired lines!

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Mj Lemon 05 March 2015

A brilliant poem. It is like a dream. Reading it, I notice it has the rhythm of a lullaby. Nicely done...a 10.

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Khalida Bano Ali 04 March 2015

A wonderful poem........................................10

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