Friday, August 2, 2019

The Dreamer's Hour Comments

Rating: 5.0

When the sun waves farewell, I'll keep my rendezvous
With my love, in a sanctum well-hidden from view;
To the Tower of Happiness together we'll climb,
It won't be long now, it's just a matter of time
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Bipasha D 02 August 2019

Another amazing write with excellent rhyme and rhythm. The last three stanzas really touched my heart.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 August 2019

But I know that tonight when the stars fill the sky, We'll be together once again, my love and I; For all dreamers have an hour when they quietly stray To their own magic realm, and love the night away......touching expression with nice collocation. A beautiful poem on love and dream is astutely delineated. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem with us.10

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