The Dreamer Comments

Very good poem. The vivid imagery derived through the metaphors and similes used served to heighten the feelings of confusion, of being lost (I'm not sure if this is the effect you'd have liked to achieve, but it works) . The ending is particularly good, it serves as a sort of answer and closure to the poem, and as a calming factor to the emotions invoked while reading the poem.

wow really good! well my imagination was enlightened

it is good...but idk how to say it u seem to repeat ur self even thou u do a good job explaining things, and keeping rythm...