The Dreamer Comments

A concise and insightful piece of poetry written with conviction

I like your intent however. There is much to be said about dreams, that many under estimate.

Dorothea it is obvious that English is you first language. The line reversals never work. (subject verb object of the verb) The line will read smoother with direct language.

" Dreams all are real till the dreamer wakes! " Dorothea Mackellar

Brilliant poem and last line took it to a different level altogether: Dreams all are real till the dreamer wakes!

Why did Dorothea decide to make the poem The Dreamer and what does the poem mean and represent