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Brilliant hardly describes this one!

A very elegent poem. Made me exausted with medical words, yet, 'Your kiss is like chemotherapy Healing my terminal desires For you' a wonderful explanation. Well done Sulaiman.. Regards, Kolitha

it great and i like it

nice choice of words great poem altogether!

Reminds me a poem of mine I wrote a while back in my mother tongue Estonian. It's such a great poem. A masterpiece indeed. A 10 from me.

i will run short of words to praise yr poetry..or shud i say a masterpiece? Wonderful!

very interesting! remind me of ER movie! keep writing, brother!

well use of words. i would neva tyhought of writing a poem in this form. curious...

Another one well done. This is good.

This is a really amazing piece I was deep in thought when i read this hanging on to every word Now when i look at any other poem by other people including me, it actually looks rather bland to this amazing peice

...yes I can sense, the powerful density of passion...

okey now that is totally awsome! It took me a few seconds to get some of the medical terms but after that, I really got it, and i really liked it! It's awsome how you use the medical terms as metaphors for how the person feels! it's really amazing! great job.

Too medical hard to understand. i am loss

This one made me smile, love on a health plan or was itr medical insurance.

BRAVO! very inspiring.

It's beautiful! ! I love it! !

very nice and detailed I like this peice and hope you keep this up

'Your kiss is like chemotherapy Healing my terminal desires For you' it's always a pleasure read you!

Exceedingly beautiful lines depicting amazing scenes. the metaphor is modern and the last scene surely takes you to the cclosing chapter still with few questions, , a 10 ++

this poem was awesome! . i love the info in it. me wanting to be a pathologist and all, the last part touched me :) you are an amazing poet. keep up the good work that keeps blood pumping through our arteries. :)