Sunday, May 20, 2018

The Dream Of Hope Comments

Rating: 5.0

...roads are dust we trudge with legs
...wines are water we drink to dregs
Knelt knees are for pride to beg
Dreams unhatched like a rotten egg
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Shehu Abubakar Niasse
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Chinedu Dike 20 May 2018

Fine and lofty verse set aside for sober reflection. Beautiful rendition of words to utmost justice in rhythmic splendour. Poignant depiction of the slumbering giant - Nigeria, written in persuasive poetic expressions with artistic brilliance. Thanks for sharing Shehu and do remain enriched.

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