Wednesday, October 18, 2017

The Dream Of Day Comments

Rating: 5.0

the dream of day is calling me
the smell of morning coffee brews
a hint of light is in the east
that says the time has come to choose
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Barry Middleton
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Lodigiana Poetess 20 October 2017

I hear the rumble of the street that greets the dawn's discrete disguise Love this..very nice piece...10

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Lodigiana Poetess 20 October 2017

I hear the rumble of the street that greets the dawn's discrete disguise.....Love this! really nice work..10

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Dimitrios Galanis 19 October 2017

Great prescription of our experience in life in poetical mood and form.Beautiful!

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