The Dream In The Journey Comments
As the train lumbered along the craggy path,
And the sounds of chug smothered the engine sloth,
The tree branches, from the window canvas,
Could be seen spreading in a thoughtful pause
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hey lovely and picturesque i love this dream in the journey lots of rhyming too +10 regards anju
rhythm is there, so rarely found, rhyme is there, both together unusual now a days. the expression is great. i appreciate you as a poet.
I felt as if I were riding on that train myself! Excellent poem! I think this is my favorite poem of yours.
Beautifully written. Good rhymes. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing with me
Beautiful Rajesh! Something we all wanted to write but could not help this amount of imagery...Especially the rhymes are excellent............10
The poem is Ok with rhyming but many a places it seems jagged with burden of parade! Surely I have felt a feeling of contrast between the freshness of countryside as seen from atrain window with a reverie, however, the sudden reality of our cities is what we end up with.
The stanzas with beautiful rhymings.........anticipating a 'pleasure to read' poem so well written.Im immensed in your density of vibrancy.
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7/21/2025 7:01:00 AM # 1.0.0
A Bridge between reality and the dream. Through that train, you were able to see a lot, images and places that blend in the mind to create a wonderful, realistic, dreamy scene. Wonderful poem!