Saturday, August 27, 2005

The Dream I Dared Not Dream Comments

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I've lost the joy that used to meet your smile,
And found without its light my life now feels
That I have squandered love; It takes a while
Before faith's misconception hurts as real.
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David Zvekic
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Chelsea Pace 03 January 2008

its nicely written and i like the way u were goining with ur words. i also love ur word choice. my poems in a way sound like urs too. though this is the only poem i have read from u. i beileve that u and me could be a lot a like.

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A Harrie 27 August 2005

this is so sad, nicely written. Amanda

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