Saturday, June 6, 2009

-the Dream- Comments

Rating: 2.6

sleep slowly consumes me
i drift into a land unknown.

i ponder my surroundings
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carly bachor
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Morgan Millard 06 June 2009

I love your description of 'paper flowers' - it makes them seem do delicate. The short stanzas make it lovely to read, good write :)

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