Monday, November 19, 2007

The Dream Comments

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She rode the stallion bareback,
pressed against his spine.
They galloped free together,
it simply blew her mind.
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jerry hughes
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Reshma Ramesh 28 October 2008

oh! ! bitter sweet sad ending............great write......will be back for more...thanks

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Riquetta Elliott 16 January 2008

What a nice story. Your expression was flowing and enthused.

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Ernestine Northover 20 November 2007

A lovely write Jerry, the flow was excellent and a lovely story opened up from the page. A delight to find. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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