Sunday, October 4, 2015

The Dream Comments

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when i lay me down to sleep
i see her face appear and then
within the dream i ask implore and beg her
please don't come again
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Robert Smith
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Sylvaonyema Uba 12 December 2016

A nice piece! Thanks for sharing with us. Sylva Onyema Uba

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Brian Mayo 21 October 2015

Great poem. It has an honest, sincere quality that makes it work very well.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 October 2015

Life changes on while dreams come true with positive attitudes. Very interesting and wise sharing definitely...10

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