Thursday, July 26, 2012

The Dream Comments

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Return to me let me smell your sweet perfume
Not lavender, though that was good
The roses were just as sweet.
What I missed even more was your splash of love.
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C. Albert Andrews
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Payal Parande 31 July 2012

awww.......so beautiful..... love is an incredible emotion it expresses our special attachment to a person and you expressed that attachment so perfectly when i was reading it i was feeling like i was listening to a romantic song but yet i was reading your poem i just never wanted to end it and that is the only thing that making me sad but overall what a splendid piece.....thank you so much for sharing it love, payal

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