Wednesday, August 31, 2011

The Dream Comments

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Staggering around on an empty road
With an empty heart, where are you?
Around me, everything collapses in the smoke
Of the world burning down, it's all so cold
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Tori Bachue
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Vincent Valentine 31 August 2011

I really enjoyed your poem, its sensitive. Nice job. Keep up the good work.

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