Saturday, October 13, 2018

The Dream Comments

Rating: 5.0

Of the many planets in the world
I like Jupiter the brightest of all
For I always dislike the darkness
Which only gives distress and agony
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Susheela Alexiose
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Dev Anand 12 November 2018

There in Jupiter's mansion We danced and made merry....you love Jupiter the lover star.......... you write beautifully love scenes

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Dr Antony Theodore 18 October 2018

But I thank Jupiter for the precious hours He shared in my life till the dawning For the love he filled in me Helped me bloom like a tree...love is the essence of your soulllllllll. your craving and description even going to the level of stars to describe your feelings is marvelous.... thank u. tony

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