Thursday, July 22, 2010

The Dream Comments

Rating: 5.0

With just the two of us in the room
Me in bed and you in my head
The timeless grip of her in my thoughts
In a moment... AN ANGEL APPEARS
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David Beckham
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Patrícia Gaspari 28 July 2010

Loved it! ! ' With just the two of us in the room Me in bed and you in my head' that was the key part to me... Great job! :)

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Beautifully Broken 27 July 2010

very well written :) enjoyed very much! !

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Keli Mims 23 July 2010

Beautifuly written. I like it.

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 23 July 2010

Sir you’ve metamorphosed the virtuality into reality…yeah Poets are dreamer and clairvoyant and clairaudient …excellent romance…enjoyed the purple…and pink of rose of your’s three …ROMANCE TRIO [RT] …. thanks sharing… Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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Marina Gasbey 22 July 2010

Again, another stunning poem! The way you display the longing for the dream... Beautiful! Thankyou so much for sharing..... Marina Gasbey.... :)

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