Tuesday, January 5, 2010

The Dream Comments

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Guns to my head, thoughts I dread,
Voices calling,
The past screaming,
My precious blood soaked my air,
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Andrew Lunel
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Justin Unanue 07 February 2010

I really like this poem, has a very good story to it, very good wording and imagery, very good story. Now if I may add this one criticism without offending you here it is, you were in trouble and were about to die, and all that which is good, but then it turns out to be a dream... so why are we supposed to care?

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Cynthia Buhain-baello 05 January 2010

Intense, creative, and story woven so excellently in this narrative makes this poem a masterpiece. The title ties the whole poem appropriately and the last lines give the final bow to create this lovely gift of a poem! 10+++++

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