Monday, April 23, 2007

The Dream Comments

Rating: 4.9

You came to me again last night,
And in my dreams I held you so tight.
I smell your sweet perfume and touch your warm skin,
Your face so clear, your lips so near.
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David Barlow
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Ana Monnar 11 September 2007

Beautiful romantic poem................A 10 plus.........

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Princess Me 03 August 2007

David, I sure can relate to this piece. Whether they come to you in a dream or in person...you just can't help but wonder...so many questions....Another wonderful write. Love Princess

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David Harris 27 July 2007

David, if I ever met the person who once stole my heart forty odd years ago I'd want to know the same questions you ask. Whenever I'm out I always scan faces just hoping to see them. One thing I always forget I'm looking for someone as used to be not as they might look now. Another beautiful poem that I know comes straight from the heart. Someone who experiences the same thing can always tell. Top marks and thanks for sharing my friend. David

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Amanda May Moore 01 July 2007

wow, that was beautiful. wow wow wow I love this poem!

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helloo...i really can relate to this poem.I dreamed of him even if we parted long time ago.. It's just that, I know, i still can get over him.I'd still wish it us who's together right now...Nice one. Keep it up!

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David Barlow

David Barlow

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