The Dreadful Flames Of Love Comments
The dimly lit room with a candle
Her finger tips dripping in blood
Dance on the piano keys slowly
Kissing the music with her broken pieces
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Hi Asavri, Lovely rendering. I am taken by surprise by your lines: And darkness envelopes her body Comforting her insecure heart... Wow! What an awesome imagery... I am reminded of the famous lines by Great Malayalam Poet. Akkitham: Velicham dukkhamaanunnee Tamassallow sukhpradham.... Meaning, Light is harbinger of sadness, my dear! Darkness is comforting... Great people think alike!
Very impressive write, Asavri Dhillon. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.
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7/29/2025 11:34:27 AM # 1.0.0
You are a poet of innate talent, dear!
Thank you. : )