Wednesday, January 22, 2014

The Dracula Love Comments

Rating: 3.3

Exotic and panic,
love in deep.
lips not couple to kiss,
But piercing pliable neck.
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Ankit Verma
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Har Srishty 02 February 2014

Hello Ankit, A nice poem, scary an horrible. DRACULA, WATCH OUT. BEFORE DRINKING THE POOR BLOOD OF INDIANS got it tested, lest thou should be affected with m.i.v posetive. Exellent.

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James Mclain 30 January 2014

Twin holes that Pierce the silver neck each twist mine lips to seek the starkest blond side of the moon....iip

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Thomas Duncky 23 January 2014

nice imagery in your picturesque piece

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 22 January 2014

if you believe in love, its ways are of little consequence.

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Indranil Bhaduri 22 January 2014

Very dark.. very intense.. interesting subject.. good job.

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