The Downfall Of A Peeping Tom (Ouch!) Comments

Randonly clicking about, oh how happy I was to find this funny little gem.

very funn I loved it keep it coming

This is very funny, he got his just desserts in the end, naughty boy! Thanks for the fun, Love Duncan X

Ha! Ha! Ha! Perty dam good writin' Ms. More. Here is to a ten fallin' your way off'a the ladder of hilarity. God bless and best wishes-Michael Jeffrey Gale.

Deanna I thoughly enjoyed this poem of yours, I like this kind of writing about everyday life, well put together.

MOST ENJOYABLE PIECE, DEANNA (HILTON) MORE..(gotta be carefull what ya write in your Bio) ONLY KIDDING W/YA.YOU HAVE A DEXTEROUS FLAIR FOR A GOOD STORY ON PAPER...YOU KNOW HOW TO BRING THE READER NOT JUST TO YOUR WORK...BUT RATHER, INSIDE THE WORK...AND THAT DIFFERENTIATES THE GOOD WRITERS FROM THE OVER ACHIEVEING WRITERS...I'LL BE READING MORE OF YOUR WORK OVER THE NEXT FEW DAYS...BUT '' DOWNFALL GETS A PERFECT (10) ! '''''''''''''''''''''''''~F. J. R.~''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''

Deanna, that's what I like, a poem with a moral... well written and funny stuff! ! Brian