Tuesday, May 22, 2007

The Dove-Part 1 Comments

Rating: 5.0

A dove, starving for love
Was lured by a crumb...
Living in a cage made of razors
Trying to find the safest way out
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Ivanna Halliday
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Brian Mills 09 January 2008

wowowow.......very deep and full of true and raw emotions......love the anologies you put into this one! ! great write.....truly makes you ponder eh! ! ! ! Brian~

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