Friday, July 23, 2010

The Dove Of Truth Comments

Rating: 4.4

The dove of truth is sitting in our garden
Our gaze inside the room
Light and truth just outside our window
Our eyes see only gloom
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Aufie Zophy
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Lem in 03 April 2013

It is really nice to me.This world is reality, but truth never leave, we must discover it. :)

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Kasia Fedyk 25 May 2012

So Divine beautiful, the words of truth, in the arms of eternal light may we fly on the wings of love. Love and Light! And Thank you so much for your kindest words! Kasia

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Jinal Oswal 28 March 2012

A real nice poem.. truth, light and love is all around us... wow! ! I loved the poem :)

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Lasoaphia Quxazs 11 February 2012

You are on the right track. However, we should always follow our feelings. Do not try to be what you are not, because of the influence of the world. I see the beauty of the soul surfacing. Wait upon the Lord patiently, and some day it will be clear.

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Sara Fielder 27 January 2012

Yes, if we could only push Mr. ego aside and tap into our soul/our truth our lives would be so much better. Thank you for this message. Peace, S.

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Mbali Gina 21 July 2011

Beautiful piece, nice one, the truth will set us free...

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Wow, I love this poem.10/10

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 04 February 2011

Why should this dove of truth remain in one garden? Let it fly in all directions. Your poem is really nice. You are flying in your ideas like the dove of truth. A very honest and truthful write.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 December 2010

Love and truth just outside my window But my ears are deaf for them.. it is un- making of life.. total mismatch with aim.... nice poem to be read and reread......10

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Sreekala Sukumaran 21 September 2010

Ego spoils the relationship very true it is...In a very beautiful manner you have expressed what the dove of truth is all about.... Well written liked it very much...10/10

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Okan Emanet 02 August 2010

The style in the selection of the words in terms of etymology really affects the whole poem and additionally there are important messages as to the structure of divinity... Thanks a lot for such a wonderful sharing... I am looking forward to others to be excellently written by you, my poem friend...

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Meggie Gultiano 31 July 2010

A beautiful piece....! !

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Dr Antony Theodore 26 July 2010

If just my ego could be silenced The dove of truth is never far away Truth, light and love is all around, My soul will pray. Ego is a big problem in our lives. it destroys relationship to God and to human beings. thank u for the great idea

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Lynn Glover 23 July 2010

You have given us a beautiful poem with a taste of what the dove of truth is all about. Keep up the good work, Lynn.

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Truth, light and love have a way of piercing the gloom, only if we allow each to penetrate. The soul is so easily damaged, just allow the dove of truth to cross the threshhold! A beautiful, meaningful poem.; D

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