The door
You did not know
I opened to you
During the cyclone
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Far away from you In solitude I opened it And beckoned you/// superb loving expression
During the cyclone When you and I In the open Endured its ferocity. I opened the door for you in silence and solitude..... experience of sufferings together that helps to open up the door of love. great thinking.. tony
A lovely poem! I liked the last stanza most.....Far away from you/In solitude/I opened it/And beckoned you...10
Very interesting poem inviting wide range of interpretations. Expresses so much in so few words.
The beauty and the impact of these words is just awesome. It leaves some images of love as well as of longing. Thanks.
A deep thought has been expressed through a door as if it is alive. A beautiful philosophical poem shared nicely. Loved reading it.
Interesting writing that leaves much open to interpretation. I like that. I like the repeated use of the word open in various forms. Well done. I could interpret it as a couple going through turmoil resulting from an outer force where one partner opens a door to peace of some sort.
a profound write of unselfishness and love of another? .............superbly written
A beautiful expression of love. In solitude...i opened it. So poetically put.
In solitude I opened it And beckoned you. in solitude i open the doors now............ far away from u. there is mystical thoughts in your poem.... a mystery......... thank you for the nice feeling i get when i read you. tony
Door to the dear ones are always b opened, nice poem
Beautiful invocation in a nice short poem. Thank you.
A short and sweet poem! Loved reading this beautiful poem again!