Saturday, April 2, 2016

The Door Comments

Rating: 4.9

The door
You did not know
I opened to you
During the cyclone
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
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Dr Dillip K Swain 12 February 2020

A short and sweet poem! Loved reading this beautiful poem again!

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Mahtab Bangalee 14 July 2019

Far away from you In solitude I opened it And beckoned you/// superb loving expression

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Dr Antony Theodore 05 February 2019

During the cyclone When you and I In the open Endured its ferocity. I opened the door for you in silence and solitude..... experience of sufferings together that helps to open up the door of love. great thinking.. tony

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Dr Dillip K Swain 01 February 2019

A lovely poem! I liked the last stanza most.....Far away from you/In solitude/I opened it/And beckoned you...10

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Savita Tyagi 25 January 2019

Very interesting poem inviting wide range of interpretations. Expresses so much in so few words.

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Rajnish Manga 04 October 2018

The beauty and the impact of these words is just awesome. It leaves some images of love as well as of longing. Thanks.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 December 2017

A deep thought has been expressed through a door as if it is alive. A beautiful philosophical poem shared nicely. Loved reading it.

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Pamela Sinicrope 24 June 2017

Interesting writing that leaves much open to interpretation. I like that. I like the repeated use of the word open in various forms. Well done. I could interpret it as a couple going through turmoil resulting from an outer force where one partner opens a door to peace of some sort.

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Tom Allport 24 June 2017

a profound write of unselfishness and love of another? .............superbly written

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Ramesh Rai 13 June 2017

Quite an exquisite write with deep thoughts.

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Qiniso Mogale 12 May 2017

A great poem. Well penned

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Nosheen Irfan 11 June 2016

A beautiful expression of love. In solitude...i opened it. So poetically put.

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Dr Antony Theodore 14 April 2016

In solitude I opened it And beckoned you. in solitude i open the doors now............ far away from u. there is mystical thoughts in your poem.... a mystery......... thank you for the nice feeling i get when i read you. tony

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V.m.saraswathy Munuswamy 13 April 2016

Door to the dear ones are always b opened, nice poem

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Beautiful and meaningful poem likes.

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Edward Kofi Louis 06 April 2016

I opened to you! Nice work.

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Raymond Farrell 06 April 2016

Short but innovative.

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I am happy you are writing again. Keep rocking.

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Anil Kumar Panda 03 April 2016

Meaningful drop. Thanks for sharing. Waiting for more.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 03 April 2016

Beautiful invocation in a nice short poem. Thank you.

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