A room
off on its own,
Laughing children, throwing stones,
Teasing times, heartbreak chimes,
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good composition, fine thought, I like it, thanks. go on. I invite you to read my poems and comment.
An excellent poem that deserves attention. The note beautifully adds to the appeal of the poem. The title is metaphoric. I give you 10/10 for the beauty of the poem and its positive tone. 'Outside the Door, where i may see. Freedom's lights, and spirits true, I wonder, I wonder, Do Dreams Come True! ' These lines are but pieces of gems.