Tuesday, May 2, 2006

The Donkey Survives Comments

Rating: 5.0

A donkey who was old and daft
fell into a deep mining shaft.
The farmer heard the donkey's cries
and when the sun rose in the skies
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Raynette Eitel 02 May 2006

This is so well written, Herbert...and of course, very funny. And then as a plus, the story has a moral which everyone migh heed. Well done, my friend. Raynette

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kskdnj sajn 02 May 2006

Great work! ! ! Very fun to read, and rhymed smoothly. A rhyme pro Herbert!

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Scarlett Treat 02 May 2006

I JUST WISH THAT THIS VOTING MACHINE HAD A 20 VOTE ON IT. THIS IS HYSTERICAL!

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Mike Finley 02 May 2006

God, you are a machine. How did you this so fast? It's really very good.

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Sandra Osborne 02 May 2006

LOL... Oh yes... Vintage Herbert! I loved it! 10+

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