The Domestic Pigs Comments

Interesting idea Mam.

Food for who? A meaningful thought provoking three liner! 10+

Food fast approaching......meaningful piece.Thank u, dear poetess. anjandev roy.

A wonderful three liner! My great pleasure revisiting this precise work!

A domestic poem that is well written.

Ten domestic pigs Squealing, wiggling short tails... Food fast approaching... Sweet

It will definitely be an interesting sight to watch a family of pigs and piglets wiggling their short tails and squealing for food! A domestic scene is brought alive before the readers. A great Haiku!

Very deep observation.. In Case of mind it is true

Squealing, wiggling short tails Food fast approaching. soo true..... and very powerful observation and presentation...... thank u dear poetess. tony

Ten domestic pigs Squealing, wiggling short tails Food fast approaching.........much impressive. My pleasure reading time and again.

A cute poem dear Rose! My pleasure revisiting it! Keep on penning...! Wish you all the best!

I am a vegetarian so I will take the meaning the opposite of what might be intended.++10

Amusing depiction. Interesting to read and to enjoy humour. Thanks for sharing.

It's provision of food that makes animals loving the humans. A lovely poem.

I like this poem. Short and amazing scene of squealing pigs.

An amazing Haiku Rose! Enjoyed the humour...10

Food fast approaching.nice writing, thanks for sharing,10

I love this haiku of yours! Funny, playful, and great choice of words.