Tuesday, September 3, 2019

The Dolphins Comments

Rating: 5.0

How happy they seem when playing
The joy is in their eyes
Going up and down in the ocean
To tell each other "I love you"
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LeeAnn Azzopardi
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Dr Antony Theodore 13 September 2019

Going up and down in the ocean To tell each other " I love you" Their language is almost universal...thank u for spreading your universal language of love. a fine poem. tony

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Mj Lemon 06 September 2019

Language and meaning do not demand verbalization! Brilliant observation, LeeAnn. A great verse!

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Carl Roussell 04 September 2019

A creative write where togetherness and longing shine in your words.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi

LeeAnn Azzopardi

Detroit Mich
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