Wednesday, January 15, 2014
The Dolphin And The Diver Comments
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I am diving when a dolphin swims by,
I hold my breath until I sigh,
I cannot believe she is so near,
Looking at me with no fear.
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Lorraine Colon
15 January 2014
You have so beautifully narrated your love and kindness for a creature in distress. It was a joy to read.
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Pradip Chattopadhyay
15 January 2014
the poem composed in simple narrative rhymes exudes love for the animal. great write.
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7/27/2025 4:52:54 AM # 1.0.0
This was my first poem. The kind comments below inspired me to try to write more like it.