The eyeballs' jet, nielloed depths
With shining glint of vital life within,
With trust-reposing and faithfullest abandon.
They gaze at you serenely,
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So helpful, so obedient of grace! So buckled, fastened, glued to master-man! ....so good to man.Beautiful poem on dog and its eyes. Thanks and congratulations for choosen this poem as the poem of the day.
Yes! Humans are a dog's best friend.Lovely tribute to our canine companions who are always true to heart.. a ten...
They gaze at you serenely, ...................................... perfect observation. Thanks for choosing such subject for writing.
nice writings- There must be some divinity canine Who's made us, humans, worshippers of dogs! really good understanding
a wonderful and inspirational right that of the unconditional love canine's give if they don't first bite? ..............well penned Oleg
Indeed, it is the dog with its eyes that composed, not I whatsoever! Thank you so much!
Dear Oleg, such a splendid poem of the day.....congrats for being chosen....10++++
As a dog lover I can't resist these type of poems. I like the heading and the theme. However, the poem is heavy going. I would suggest an economy of words.
Thank you for a valuable comment, Robert! I wish I'd written it differently. But what is published, is an immedate, maybe raw idea couched in awkward forms founded on the feeling I was overcome when composing.
A nice write... I would like you read my poem In the mid of the night depression you are killing me too........ Naila
Because they speak with their eyes, And their love for us and their generous heart is also expressed, thru their kind and wonderful Looks and eyes. Your poem made me cry, this I wrote with tears in my eyes, because it went and touched so deep and all I though of was when I lost my Sandy's eyes. An unforgettable work of feeling and poetic dignity.