Lady, the dog that looks like a rat
Chases a beautiful Persian cat
She puts in high gear
Running like a deer
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Beautiful rendition of words with a tinge of humour. A sweet flow for readers' pleasure. Reminded of 'Baa Baa Black Sheep' and 'Twinkle Twinkle Little Star'. Thanks for sharing this wonderful poem with us.
Nicely crafted with a sweet sense of humour. You're such a talented writer. Remain blessed.
I had the privilege of knowing Lady...She was a good and funny dog...Love this poem...10+++
This poem closes the circle of life. Everybody runs to their own needs. When one saves the baseball bat, then it is the top of the chase.
Lady, the dog that looks like a rat Chases a beautiful Persian cat She puts in high gear Running like a deer Then trips over a huge baseball bat......so haunting and amusing. A beautiful Limerick nicely executed.10
I'm a cat lover so I hope the Persian escaped! A very amusing limerick. Like my friend Valsa I'll give it a straight 10!
Nice humour! ! With the muse of a dog. Thanks for sharing.
You have drawn a beautiful picture! I see the whole scene before my eyes! A hilarious limerick, so natural and entertaining! A 10
Lady......[as in Lady and the Tramp, a Disney animated movie from about 60 years ago? ].... is YOUR pet? Lady 'put it in high gear' aka ran even faster than she/he had been (running) ? and: is this a true story? it's cute, but i don't think i'd enjoy having a dog which looked like a rat! bri :)
hahahahahahahahahahahahaha Oh thank you for making me laugh! ! ! I love the difference between my expectation of gooey-eyed tribute to lovely graceful pet and this forthright description of a real dog who in the midst of grace trips and tumbles like a real dog! Excellent on all fronts! ! ! 10+++++++++++++++++++++++ and onto my fav list! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
Excellent funny Limerick Rose Marie, Top marks.