Saturday, April 8, 2023

The Doctor Said Comments

Rating: 5.0

I'll be lost inside my head
Bad thoughts 'til 4 a.m.
Then I'll try to sleep
And I can't tell anyone
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JayJay Maybank
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LeeAnn Azzopardi 10 April 2023

JayJay I feel yr pain. I have been struggling for thirty years; only poetry makes me better

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Quite a poignant statement. The abstruse state of mind, the causeless anxieties and a heart loaded with ill-omen is expressed vividly in the poem. Repetition of a few lines make reinforcing statements… 5*

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