Friday, July 9, 2010

The Doctor And Me Comments

Rating: 5.0

When I looked at him
saw the syringe in his hands
felt heaven beside me
awhile pain will be gone…
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lady grace
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Loved the poetic story tell! Wonderfully done.; D

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Akram Awadat 15 July 2010

wow, very nice good poem, i like the lines

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Eyan Desir 10 July 2010

Goood ability u have turning real life experience into a poem good write

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Oyelakin Gbolahan 09 July 2010

In times of pains, learn to look up to God for help...He is all Help we've got in time of need... This is quite expressional...like it...hope you latter got a succour? Read my poem too... and add me in ur friend list

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Sadiqullah Khan 09 July 2010

May God give you perfect health Lady. (Bouque from me) .10

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