The Divine Unknown Wisdom Comments

powerful write.. happens all to often, both emotionally and physically..10+

I like this, it's well expressed in a few words. Good job.

powerful poem i can feel that 'maternal death' -10 anjali

very touching write, compassionate and loving....meaningful the great bonding between a mother and her child.... the unknown divine wisdom.... the sad parting.....which only their heart's and soul know.... 10+++

i could feel your passion and strong feelings behind these lines. well done.

A very compassionate write, Nightengale. So few words but so much feeling and emotion. Thanks...10.. Richard

I can feel the compassion in your silent, poetic voice. Strong, condensed emotion makes these brief lines memorable. Superb write. Wrmest regards, Sandra

You seem to say so much in so few words Nightingale, this is very sad but shows the strong bond between mother and child, 10 Lynda xx

Good strong write...Fi..10

This is a very bitter of your poems....... Tsira

good job. it was beautiful. thanks so much for sharing this wonderful poem 10 from me

a poem with taking words, well penned straight to deep feelings. death is always a way to unknown. great poem indeed.

wow! i just made a poem about a son and mother relationship but in a different light. read my poem ' on free love'

One of the most moving of short pieces and getting straight into the heart of any mother - - - thank you.... Fay.

A poem that is as short as this can make a huge impact on the reader as this as done to me. That is what poetry is all about..and you have done it very well. Karin Anderson

very good piece...too much insight put into it...enjoyed it..thanks for sharing!

my gosh, , , whatta sad lines.... naizz

i agree with Viola here, it's short but it has SO much emotion put into it.. i loved it..~Hazel G.E

this is quite a painfull read..it only took a few lines to envoke such a powerful reaction...nice work