Sunday, January 4, 2009

The Divine Page Of My Diary...(Passionate Divine Love...) Comments

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while lost in a deep sleep
felt someone under the blanket slowly creeps
opening my eyes, i saw its you
with love mixed with passion and lust
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Sebastine Humaemo
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Nia Riz 16 January 2009

i...um...i dont know what to say...i feel i am a bit too small to read this and understand...bt eah...i did understand....all i can say is....well written! ...

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Reshma Ramesh 07 January 2009

beautiful poem making love.................great write............top marks for this.....very well done

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Chitra - 05 January 2009

a passionate write effusing with the emotional aroma of a pure soul

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Amy Douglass (Fifita) 04 January 2009

What a beautiful and passionate poem. Well done. :)

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Satuated with sensuality. Keep writing.

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