Thursday, March 2, 2017

The Divine Nectar Comments

Rating: 5.0

An angelic face with a calming smile
washes away all wearies of life
A soothing voice of a heavenly hymn
a shepherd's song on a fife
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Simon Chamoun
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Avik Datta Gupta 25 April 2017

The so near yet so far syndrome transforms adoration to yearning. Great write. Most importantly keep writing

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Simon Chamoun 27 April 2017

Thank you for your kind words dear

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Rajnish Manga 02 March 2017

Beautiful romantic expression and a sizzling passion of a lover's heart. I wish the protagonist succeeds in his venture. Thanks. I quote: 'rest my lips on their delightful place'

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Simon Chamoun 02 March 2017

Glad you liked it. Thank you for taking the time to comment and for your kind words.

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