Tuesday, October 22, 2013

The Divine Intervention Comments

Rating: 5.0

In your soft hands I keep mine,
Holding the tiny fingers I feel divine.
Have I ever told you my babies, you are my precious gifts from God?
Feel my heart through my touch, dear little angels
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Husna Amin
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Husna Amin 24 October 2013

Oh! that's so kind of you. Such appreciation surely motivates! Thank you so much! @Khairul Ahsan

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Khairul Ahsan 23 October 2013

'I see you in me as I see me in you, it is surely a majestic celebration... Here, as I pen down my happiness, I salute the divine intervention! ' And I salute thee for this beautiful creation! A beautiful poem flowing right from the heart! 10/10.

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Husna Amin 23 October 2013

Thank you Dave! That's really kind of you. @ Dave Walker

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Dave Walker 22 October 2013

A lovely poem with a really great flow to it.

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