The Distances Comments

This is a strong poem of travel actually as well as a metaphor.

Certainly, you aren't lazy if you read it. Thanks for that! I doubt I hit the nail squarely. Hopefully with some time/work, it'll flesh-/pixel-out. hehe :) Maybe it strains in places syntactically/semantically, or maybe worse, the deployment is merely distracting and/or paltry in effect. But the computer world does seem to call for some kind of logical bound in this (or a related) direction. Thanks for the luck. Can use every bit.

thanks for the poet note. i got the sense of 'twinkle....' when i read the opening. for some reason this poem sounds familiar. ? not my cup of tea....maybe too technical for me? or am i being lazy? anyway, thanks for sharing. good luck with the girl.