Saturday, October 5, 2013

The Dismayed Comments

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Cry not any one when I breathe my last
For my exit deserves a tear-less farewell
This world I came with lots of hopes
The life I craved for like any other soul
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Somanathan Iyer
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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 08 October 2013

Though my life span crossed halfway mark Not me alone in this painful journey Dear poet Somanathan, please do not get discouraged. It is still only half way mark. The second half is with a new knowledge and a mature view. Keep writing, keep working, and you will make it really worthwhile. You know what you missed in the first half. Beautiful poem though. Thank you.

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