Friday, January 2, 2015

The Discarded Tree Comments

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A bare Christmas tree stands all alone
Decorations and presents all are gone
That joyous time a thing of the past
The gift of Jesus will sure to last
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Patricia Grantham
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Hans Vr 16 November 2015

Beautiful poem. The symbols may come and go but the love and warmth of superb messages and great values are as permanent as the succession of day and night. Beautiful poem

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 13 February 2015

Once stood tall the center of attention When its time is over, no one pays any attention. That is how life is. Beautiful poem. Thank you.

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Darlene Marion 26 January 2015

This is a beautiful poem.

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Dee Corpolongo 18 January 2015

Beautiful and makes one truly think! Thank you.

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Louis Rams 11 January 2015

the tree is discarded and has sunk in the ocean, but your poem brings back so many emotions

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Om Chawla 06 January 2015

Ritualistic symbols loose their relevance after the occasion, it is the message that is more relevant and that is very well expressed in last two lines of your of poem.

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Patricia Grantham

Patricia Grantham

Moncks Corner, South Carolina
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