Monday, January 21, 2019

The Disappearing Fragrance. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Imagine being without
The perfume of the earth
Like an Eagle
Without an updraft
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Geoffrey Fafard
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Diana van den Berg 21 January 2019

Lovely and so horribly and sadly true, but your poem is doing its bit. We all have to do what we can, and not feel guilty for not doing what we can't. I loved every line - and they all hit home - but the line I loved the most was the crocodile without the smile. :)

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Geoffrey Fafard 22 January 2019

Diana -your complimentary comments are so thankfully received. I am thrilled you liked this poem...As far as crocodiles and their smiles are concerned they really are a lovely beast but not up too close and personal. The smile then becomes very captivating indeed.........Cheeres Geoffrey.

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