Sunday, January 2, 2005

The Diner Comments

Rating: 4.5

Alone, she desires this cluttered atmosphere-
An old woman takes off her plastic bonnet
revealing a mastery of curls
hardly disturbed by the rain.
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Adryan Barnathan
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Cj Heck 08 February 2005

Very well written - a slice of real. I can actually see the old woman. Well done. Warm regards, CJ

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Herbert Nehrlich1 02 January 2005

Except for the two spelling mistakes, very good, deserving of two kisses on each cheek, coming from freshly steam-cleaned lips. You can write such good stuff! H

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