Alone, she desires this cluttered atmosphere-
An old woman takes off her plastic bonnet
revealing a mastery of curls
hardly disturbed by the rain.
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Except for the two spelling mistakes, very good, deserving of two kisses on each cheek, coming from freshly steam-cleaned lips. You can write such good stuff! H
Very well written - a slice of real. I can actually see the old woman. Well done. Warm regards, CJ