Saturday, March 3, 2018

The Difficult Journey To The High Place Of Truth Comments

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We journeyers are tired in body,
our spirits are spent,
but that is next to nothing
because we have a genius for
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Daniel Brick
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Dawn Novus 04 June 2018

We will not stop, we will not even rest... our steadfast souls... I feel that it is truth on high you have reached with this poem Daniel. Unfailingly beautiful in its form and delivery.

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Liza Sudina 07 March 2018

A very straightforward and bold mood, high aims and glory, interconnection and supporting omnipresence. Very inspiring and uplifting! ! !

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Daniel 07 March 2018

Your reaction of surprise and delight is exactly what should happen, Liza, when we think aboit thr condsequences of our beliefs.

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Glen Kappy 06 March 2018

hey, daniel! yes, what is soul? how separate it from the spirit within us? i don't know. i think of spirit as what animates us, what leaves when we pass—which i explore in my poem panty hose meditation (i know, it's a funny title for a serious subject) . is soul the accumulation we call character shaped by a lifetime of decisions that welds itself to our spirits? mainly questions here... -glen

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Daniel 07 March 2018

Your two definitions of spirit and soul may be roughly expressed but they're winningly conceived. O think you've made the necessary distinction between them and still left room for their interaction. I'm inspired to probe further along the lines you've drawn. You've done the heavy lifting. What's left to articulate is how they interpenetrate each other. It's doable.

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