The Difficult Journey To The High Place Of Truth Poem by Daniel Brick

The Difficult Journey To The High Place Of Truth



We journeyers are tired in body,
our spirits are spent,
but that is next to nothing
because we have a genius for
recovery. Meanwhile, our souls
are strengthened by a secret
ministry that operates both day
and night. They rival now the deep souls
of the ancient ones in our sacred poems.
Their souls, never weary, never withdrawn,
prevailed over the claims of the flesh
and the sickness of the mind. Even now
mu body aches with hardships of our climb,
and my mind is sick with desire for
the simplest pleasures. But -
the fibers of my soul are taut
with original energy that compels
base desires to desist and they
simmer down to nothing. And then
my mind can take flight in its search
for truth. What is Soul? Soul is Self
with something fused within it: a brief
answer that resolves many questions,
a rare courage become commonplace,
a love that has no shadow existence.
Soul is the missing page that completes
an essential manuscript - one that tells
us how to live lives worthy of glory...
A high wind slashes across cloud banks
and the sky bleeds dawn red over our
determined host. We will not stop, we will
not even rest, until the night reveals
what the day conceals: our dreams carry
this sacred truth, our steadfast souls
own it and protect it. It will begin
an Age of Wonder when it is set forth
from the high place of truth we will soon reach.

Saturday, March 3, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: faith,journey
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dawn Novus 04 June 2018

We will not stop, we will not even rest... our steadfast souls... I feel that it is truth on high you have reached with this poem Daniel. Unfailingly beautiful in its form and delivery.

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Liza Sudina 07 March 2018

A very straightforward and bold mood, high aims and glory, interconnection and supporting omnipresence. Very inspiring and uplifting! ! !

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Daniel 07 March 2018

Your reaction of surprise and delight is exactly what should happen, Liza, when we think aboit thr condsequences of our beliefs.

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Glen Kappy 06 March 2018

hey, daniel! yes, what is soul? how separate it from the spirit within us? i don't know. i think of spirit as what animates us, what leaves when we pass—which i explore in my poem panty hose meditation (i know, it's a funny title for a serious subject) . is soul the accumulation we call character shaped by a lifetime of decisions that welds itself to our spirits? mainly questions here... -glen

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Daniel 07 March 2018

Your two definitions of spirit and soul may be roughly expressed but they're winningly conceived. O think you've made the necessary distinction between them and still left room for their interaction. I'm inspired to probe further along the lines you've drawn. You've done the heavy lifting. What's left to articulate is how they interpenetrate each other. It's doable.

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