Monday, February 6, 2006

The Difference Comments

Rating: 2.6

You give me more with
your arm around my shoulder
than he gave me
with a lifetime of kisses.
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Scarlett Treat
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Jerzegirl *~~ 22 March 2006

I love this one, Scarlett. The first stanza says so much...

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Bonnie L. Fry 22 February 2006

Much said in so few a words. good write

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Chuck Audette 14 February 2006

I love the contrasts you create in this poem. So much energy contained in so few lines. -chuck

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Gina Onyemaechi 14 February 2006

Oh this is sharp and forceful, Lind. The arm thing you mention in verse 1, I'm with you on it. A power-poem, Linda, well and truly. Sunshine, Gina.

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