Thursday, October 18, 2012

The Difference Between Their Love Comments

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Once there was a dog named Snoppy,
He was so loyal to me.
Whenever I was there with him
his heart would leap up. he-hee.
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Akanksha Bhatt
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Khalida Bano Ali 10 October 2014

Rated 0, love is not confined to humans, it is gift of God to all His creatures. A nice poem.

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Simon Ojewale 04 January 2013

Magnificent! Great job here and a catchy end.

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Valsa George 31 October 2012

The canine law teaches us to be loyal and faithful to the end without looking for returns! Yes, dogs are proverbial for thier fidelty towards their masters! Hope your pet is still there to greet you back home from school! Great! Go on!

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Rishit Desai 27 October 2012

Yes wonderful and we need to learn from them. Keep it up

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Kevin Halls 23 October 2012

A dog gives us unconditional love while we humans only tend to give love for something in return. A good insight Akanksha from someone so young, well done!

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Neetha Sasidharan 21 October 2012

hey...cool poem..kp going..

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Ency Bearis 20 October 2012

A wonderful dream and expressed the love well and presented poetically. Keep the good dream. Great piece.

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Ency Bearis 20 October 2012

A wonderful dream and well expressed love and presented poetically. Keep up your good dream and write more.

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Aung Si 19 October 2012

Such an in depth heartfelt write. I so love the expression and content of this piece.Well done! !

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Hans Vr 19 October 2012

Oh yes, Akanksha, the love of animals is often greater than the love of humans. It is great if we find people who can selflessly be kind A good way to meet others with lots of kindness is to give ourselves a lot of kindness When it was stated it is in giving that we receive, it was all about kindness and gratitude Excellent poem

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Sarojini Pattayat 19 October 2012

good.You can study the people around you also.Go on and write.

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Anshul Bhatt 19 October 2012

very nice write sis! keep it up! ! ! keep smiling! all the best! :)

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Indranil Bhaduri 19 October 2012

Touches my heart, ... Great job....

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Philo Yan 19 October 2012

The answer is a 3 letter word-EGO Men kill, plunder, go to war for ego Women just go on a shopping spree Some men's ego are as big as the moon Women's egos are also called jealousy Elect a woman head and soon.

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Sanjay Mehta 19 October 2012

Dreams too are based on the actual events, nice observation and diction to is good, this is not that you are too young. I would like to share a quote, Man may be young in years but old in hours. Thanks for sharing.

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isam Abdelrahman 19 October 2012

Talent is around; clear and confident comparing to your age.go ahead Akanksha

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Free Bird 19 October 2012

a very nice poem.like it very much

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 19 October 2012

your heart is seen in your poem

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Mark Dillon 18 October 2012

Well written, you can't beat the connection and love between a person and their pet it's life long, not all people have the same dedication.

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Eindaray Kyaw 18 October 2012

You hope really does work..I like this...you make me think deeper and deeper..Thank you for that!

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Akanksha Bhatt

Akanksha Bhatt

Dehradun India
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