Once there was a dog named Snoppy,
He was so loyal to me.
Whenever I was there with him
his heart would leap up. he-hee.
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The canine law teaches us to be loyal and faithful to the end without looking for returns! Yes, dogs are proverbial for thier fidelty towards their masters! Hope your pet is still there to greet you back home from school! Great! Go on!
A dog gives us unconditional love while we humans only tend to give love for something in return. A good insight Akanksha from someone so young, well done!
A wonderful dream and expressed the love well and presented poetically. Keep the good dream. Great piece.
A wonderful dream and well expressed love and presented poetically. Keep up your good dream and write more.
Such an in depth heartfelt write. I so love the expression and content of this piece.Well done! !
Oh yes, Akanksha, the love of animals is often greater than the love of humans. It is great if we find people who can selflessly be kind A good way to meet others with lots of kindness is to give ourselves a lot of kindness When it was stated it is in giving that we receive, it was all about kindness and gratitude Excellent poem
good.You can study the people around you also.Go on and write.
very nice write sis! keep it up! ! ! keep smiling! all the best! :)
The answer is a 3 letter word-EGO Men kill, plunder, go to war for ego Women just go on a shopping spree Some men's ego are as big as the moon Women's egos are also called jealousy Elect a woman head and soon.
Dreams too are based on the actual events, nice observation and diction to is good, this is not that you are too young. I would like to share a quote, Man may be young in years but old in hours. Thanks for sharing.
Talent is around; clear and confident comparing to your age.go ahead Akanksha
Well written, you can't beat the connection and love between a person and their pet it's life long, not all people have the same dedication.
You hope really does work..I like this...you make me think deeper and deeper..Thank you for that!
Rated 0, love is not confined to humans, it is gift of God to all His creatures. A nice poem.