Sunday, August 2, 2015

The Differece Comments

Rating: 5.0

In and around
Young looks pretty
And ignore all
And lock face to face.
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Roseann Shawiak 14 August 2015

Interesting how you describe the young locking face to face - in other words kissing. Older more mature people are able to control their emotions when together, holding hands, smiling at one another. Not quite sure what you mean by the last line, What I thought it might mean didn't make sense. Thank you though for sharing. RoseAnn

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 12 August 2015

An astute contrast between the two which are poles apart.

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